Tuesday, June 19, 2012

Review – Magical Pony Ultrasounds

The site's been dead since my last update... how sad. Welp, time to fix it with some frivolity from my personal archives! Here's the review of Magical Pony Ultrasounds after the break!

(Now when a mare and a stallion love each other very much...)

(...and that's how Equestria was made!)

The Story:
Pinkie Pie approaches her marefriend Rainbow Dash saying that they should have foals. Hilarity ensues as they visit Twilight Sparkle and then Applejack, trying to get them to convince the other one of their side of the argument. Then they talk to each other, and everything gets settled.

Nope, not deep, just cute!

The Characters:
Are themselves. Really, I don't have much to say here. This is a better Pinkie than I have seen for a while, in that she switches gears quickly without being entirely random or coming out of left field, but that's about the only mentionable thing.

1 error: look instead of looked. Otherwise nothing actually wrong. Pacing was a little fast for me, but it fit the story fairly well, so it all worked out.

Yeah. Not a lot to say, a popcorn story to be read and tossed aside, but I thought it a cute one nonetheless, and sometimes those are all you really need.

In Conclusion:
A good cute little treat of a story for all those Rainbow Pie fans out there. Not bad at all, but not going to rock your world view.

The Link:

And there you have it. I promise I'll do something more substantial next time, I'm just a touch busy with rehearsals for the musical I'm in right now, so there's that, but there shall always be weekly updates. Because the show must go on!

Your musical writer,

1 comment:

  1. Oh, another fic by AA. Already read it, I agree with you here, though I would go so far as to say it's the kind of story one would read when they are out of options.