Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Review – In a Bit of a Jam


Felt like clearing up my reading list of some of the shorter stories on it. In a Bit of a Jam, after the break!

(I will call you squishy and you will be mine. You will be my squishy!)

The Story:
Hugh Jelly goes home after a day at the factory, gearing up for a big night with his little jellyfish. But when he gets there he finds her in bed with another, and what happens afterward... well...

It gets messy.

The Characters:
Hugh Jelly is the only character that really counts as a full one in this story. He is a hard working stallion, true to his love despite everything she throws at him, and really not that complex despite his... oddities when it comes to love. Really he's just a normal guy.

Execution:
Nothing wrong in here, no grammar or spelling errors, and enough jokes and jabs to keep going. No complaints.

Enjoyable?:
Well, it is certainly amusing. No world-changing piece of literature or anything like that, but it is definitely a funny little read.

In Conclusion:
A funny little story about our jelly obsessed pony, give it a read if you have a few minutes.

The Link:

Have a wonderful day everypony!

Your cleanly writer,
~Medicshy

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